Thursday, 18 June 2020

friday discovery Just dance

This Friday I did just dance for Discovery so that's where I went. Me and my friends

Tay and Wolfe join in with, which we all way do when we do just dance. So we were late because in the first place I wanted do scratch but I couldn't because I

had to be there at the very beginning. So I just did just dance with my friends.




 So we went over to the hall and go started, the first song was a song I didn’t no

the song of but I still did it. The next song was one we do all the time waka waka

but me and my did something dumb. We laid on the floor and did the dance moves

until we go told to stand up. We did lots of songs but my favorite was Rasputin

what is my favorite song and I waited along time for  that song to play, the three

thing I like about Rasputin 1. I like the song, 2. is along song and 3. the dance

moves are

hard and I like hard but not too hard. Song after song I dance and dance until I sit

one out. 



When I sat it one out the thing didn’t no was that it was the last song. So when it

was finished we had to pack up and it was also the end of discovery. So we packed

up everything and went in to our class lines and that was the end of discovery.



1 comment:

  1. Hello William, I enjoyed reading your writing about Just Dance. I remember watching you guys dance ON THE FLOOR! It was funny! I enjoy all of the songs besides Ra Ra Rasputin... There was one mistake that you made in the 3rd or 4th sentence. I think you should just check your writing again and you'll be GOOD!

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