Te Poho o Rawiri Marae
On thursday the 12 of september I went to Te Poho o Rawiri Marae for a school trip, (camp) I was nervous and excited at the same time and for my first time. The first thing we did was put are bags by the fence and sat on the ground after that. we had to wait for like 20m only we were will comed onto the marae. Once we were will comed on we got given hongi and got into are activated we started off by walking up Titirangi. BARK BARK WOOF WOOF barked this giant dog everyone got a fright.
We carried on with the walk. We went past a logging truck fuel station and a massive electric generator. We all crossed the road and got onto the footpath, it still was a long way to Titirangi hill. We past a building site but I didn't know what they were building. We all saw a big logging ship and we were finally at Titirangi hill. We started walking up Titirangi hill it was all ready exhausting when just starting walk up the hill. I felt like I was a on a BBQ the het was boiling hot. Thank to the trees for shelter but then we had to start walking up stairs STAIRS (very steep). The stairs looked like they went on forever but it did we came to some monkey bars in the middle of nowhere. Some people started to climbing on them and I was one of them. we finally to the pace we need to be. we got split into groups of three. We did our thing and just got the bottom of the hill and walked back to the Marae. we had our morning tea and we could have biscuits and a organ. YUM YUM YUM it was deelishis and a bag of twisties.
We carried on with the walk. We went past a logging truck fuel station and a massive electric generator. We all crossed the road and got onto the footpath, it still was a long way to Titirangi hill. We past a building site but I didn't know what they were building. We all saw a big logging ship and we were finally at Titirangi hill. We started walking up Titirangi hill it was all ready exhausting when just starting walk up the hill. I felt like I was a on a BBQ the het was boiling hot. Thank to the trees for shelter but then we had to start walking up stairs STAIRS (very steep). The stairs looked like they went on forever but it did we came to some monkey bars in the middle of nowhere. Some people started to climbing on them and I was one of them. we finally to the pace we need to be. we got split into groups of three. We did our thing and just got the bottom of the hill and walked back to the Marae. we had our morning tea and we could have biscuits and a organ. YUM YUM YUM it was deelishis and a bag of twisties.

Hi William, I think this blog post is amazing, but I think you made some spelling mistakes and missed some capital letters. also these sentences didn't make sense: we had to wait for like 20m only we were will comed onto the marae. Once we were will comed on we got given hongi and got into are activated we started off by walking up Titirangi.
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